Entry: Killer Wednesday, May 18, 2005



They're in danger
We're in anger
A rage for nothing
They'll leave with something

4 clenched fists
Your next on our list
to hurt today
then fade away
faces on the screen
more fame for us
centre of attention
we get a mention
and all it took
was a kid in a book
a victim of three
we killed all of them you see
We crave attention
it is our nature
reward with more mention
Last one is down
For we've been found
To jail for 20 years
But not to worry
We're in a hurry
for our 15 minutes of fame
the juries lifetime of shame
They let us go
And we wont stop, no!

*hermm... this poem sucks..but it knda gets the point across. Two serial killers are being released from jail..and obviously here in Canada, they've never heard of life sentences?! They were quite sick people, they would kidnap torture then kill, and catch it on tape. I don't think they should get out, but apparently it was the juries fault eh?*

   1 comments

Maroux
May 26, 2005   03:45 PM PDT
 
I rather think it's a good piece... I specifically liked the rhyme it has a smooth quality to it which masks the darkness of the meaning of the poem, good work :-)

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