Entry: As I Quickly Dissapeared Saturday, May 07, 2005



A wave of terror
a wail of pain
a shade of black... my sky
a collapsing home
a mangled glimpse
a dieing soul... of mine
a ripped up life
a zipped up mouth
a life I led myself
a tortured mind
an empty shell
as I quickly dissapeared
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   2 comments

jessica ^^
October 14, 2005   01:18 PM PDT
 
wow thats really good ^^
Jeremy
May 9, 2005   06:50 PM PDT
 
this is an excellent poem it makes me have to read it over and over again proably because it relates to me and many others i bet. keep it up and cant wait intill your next poem.

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